Delightfully snarky fanfic, in which we get a mostly canon-compliant inner monologue of McGonagall, mostly about Umbridge, ridiculous students and absurd colleagues. Good length, good general writing style, but lots of fluctuations in quality: Inner monologue good, storytelling mediocre, I think.
Also, what is it with fanfic authors misspelling “Dolores”?
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by J.K. Rowling · published 2003 · read 2003-01-01